Lilies On The Lake
by Katherine Kingsley
Dell
August 3, 2001
ISBN #0440236029
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REVIEW

"A talented Storyteller"

I normally enjoy Katherine Kingsley's work. Ms. Kingsley is blessed with a wonderful flair for words with fast paced storylines, appealing characters and just the right touch of humor. I tend to label her novels I've read as heartwarming. For all these reasons, I was looking forward to another satisfying reading experience when I started her LILIES ON THE LAKE. While this story, the sequel to IN THE PRESENCE OF ANGELS (that I haven't read), was well written with a smoothly flowing storyline, I was disappointed. This disappointment centered on the rather unappealing lead characters, particularly Portia (Pip) Merriem.

At 27, the lovely, spirited, scholarly, unmarried Pip is finally realizing her lifelong dream of visiting and studying in Egypt. Her dream, however, hits a snag when her companion and friend Isabel announces on their arrival in Alexandria that she is pregnant. For the next months, Pip and Isabel live on a houseboat, basically keeping to themselves to hide the unmarried Isabel's condition. When Isabel goes into labor in an isolated part of Egypt, a frantic Pip is aided by her old childhood playmate, John Henry Lovell. Isabel dies in childbirth, leaving a son Pip is determined to raise as her own.

To avoid scandal, Pip reluctantly agrees to marry John Henry. A wealthy heiress, she has always been determined to marry for love after her wastrel father married her mother for money. Now, she believes her worst fears to be true. She has attained a husband who is only interested in her money.

John Henry, for his part, has loved Pip all his life. Yet as the son of a poor tenant farmer, he has never been in the same social class as Pip, the stepdaughter of a marquess. He also still harbors hurt feelings over the then class conscious Pip's rejection ten years before. After Pip's rejection, John Henry left for India where he amassed a fortune and gained a title for service to his country. He is reluctant, however, to tell Pip about his wealth or his title because he wants her to learn to love him - not his position.

Most of LILIES ON THE LAKE dwells with Pip's misconceptions about John Henry's motives for marriage and his withholding the truth about himself to her. These plot devices became tedious, but the real problem I had with this book was Pip's character. I never warmed to the stubborn, independent, supposedly mature character. Instead, Pip came across as selfish, childish and snobbish.

John Henry fared somewhat better, but not by much. Knowing Pip's independent streak, John Henry still courted her alienation by becoming an overbearing boor after the wedding. This romantic couple, keeping an emotional distance for most of the book, just never clicked for me. No connection, no sizzle. Lord Hugo, that irresistible scoundrel in Ms. Kingsley's CALL DOWN THE MOON, had his faults but he also had a sizzling relationship with his heroine, Meggie. That type of relationship did not exist between Pip and John Henry.

Ms. Kingsley is a talented story teller, but her efforts fell short in LILIES ON THE LAKE.

Debbie Jett

Reviewed by Guest Reviewer
Courtesy Heart Rate Reviews
Posted August 3, 2001




 

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